Wednesday, May 13, 2009
Concept
Evaluation!
Hi there! Well, I think I semi-sort of achieve the purpose of my speech. To explain, I was prepared for my speech, but I didn’t really quite get it across to my audience, at least I don’t think so. I felt sort of comfortable, but not all that much. I say this because I noticed in the video that I kept on touching my hair and was kind of fidgeting every so often. I felt somewhat confident at first, only because the professor had told us to take 3 deep breaths before beginning our speech, I felt that, that really helped me out, helped everyone out actually. Of course this excersise was going to help, it is also included in the speech Evolving Art book.
If I had to do the persuasive speech over again, I would have to practice a bit more. I did practice enough, so I think, I think that the problem was that I was trying to persuade an audience. I truly think that it is much harder to persuade an audience to do something, than to inform them of something.
Again, what I did that was distracting was the whole thing with my hair. I kept touching it every so often and I know I would have thought that would have been quite distracting if I were the one listening to one speak.
In this speech, what was different was the way I tried to persuade people. In my last speech, I was not trying to persuade anyone to do anything, I was simply informing them. In my final speech, I was trying to get people to do a certain thing. I gave example of athletes and proposed a solution and a visualization to what would happen if athletes were to continue doing what they are doing.
From a scale form 1-10, I would rate my eye contact a 6. I say a 6 because sure, I would look at the audience every now and then, but I would also look at the notecards. In my second speech,however, I know for a fact that I only looked at my speech cards for a little, not as much as I did for my final speech.
On a scale from A-F, I think I would give myself a C for a grade. I say this because, it was not the worst speech ever, but it was also not the best speech ever. A “B” is considered “average”, and a “C” is considered “average.” I believe that my speech was average, it was not a wow speech, but nor was it a whatever speech!
In this speech, I mentioned I believe one source citation. I should have added more, but I couldn’t really find a way to add them into the presentation.
Based on all three speeches, I know for a fact that I did way better on my second speech, the informative speech. I say this because I seemed to have been way more prepared and also because I did not really have to look down at my notecards because I knew much of the material. :)
-Jeter!
Future Endeavors.
Tuesday, May 12, 2009
Favorite Speech
Saturday, May 2, 2009
Speech Buddy Videos
The speech buddy videos that needed to be watched for this week had to do with home schooling. The pros and cons of this subject were talked about in the videos. In the con part of it,Robert uses evidence to make it clear on what side he is on, whether he is for, or against home schooling. If you want to get something clear and out to the audience, then you really want to have evidence and good supporting material so that they know what position you are taking. In the Pro video, Dixie uses reasoning,claims, and evidence which in return allows the audience to know where she stands and choose a side.
-Jeter!
Chapter 15 Concept
Thursday, April 30, 2009
-Persuasion -->nicotine.
Saturday, April 25, 2009
Concept
The concept that I personally found the most useful and interesting was the section about persuading different types of audiences. The types of audiences are: divided, uniformed, apatheric, negative, and positive. Each of these audiences can be described in a different way. For example, a divided audience can be described as half of the audience being favorable towards something, and the other half being unfavorable; hence, the term “divided.” An apathetic audience is exactly what apathetic means! Apathetic means “showing or feeling no interest.” The audience has no such interest in the topic so the speaker has to really try and get their attention and get them interested in it. A positive audience holds a favorable view, it’s atmosphere is very positive, easy to go along with. A negative audience is the opposite of a positive audience, it holds an unfavorable view, against the topic so to speak. Lastly is the uniformed audience. The uniformed audience is an audience with no such opinion. In this occasion, the audience can try and persuade their audience by using repetition and something called redundancy. Redundancy , as you may or may not know, means the state of being no longer needed or useful. So in this case, lets say the speaker is trying to get the audience to put a stop to something because it is not useful. Well this section was super useful because now I know what types of audiences are out there and will plan my speech a whole lot better. :)
-Jeter!
Sea of Persuasion
Hiiii!! :)
I think that everyone is surrounded by a huge sea of persuasion almost every single minute of their lives, whether it be online ads,websites, magazines in a gas station, television commercials, etc. Your own friends and family can persuade you to do something. For example, they can persuade you from something like to stop smoking to something like telling you to buy this or that. You can see people around campus at SJSU handing out papers for events or even hear people yelling stuff out. For example, the other day I was walking and I heard this girl say something outloud, something about donating your used prom dress to give them to students from the bay area that cannot afford one this year. All of this sea of persuasion can either persuade you to do something good and that is necessary or make you do something that is unnecessary and not needed. One can be a more critical consumer by simply saying no to some ads. You don’t need to buy the pair of latest shoes,clothes,etc. that is a choice, but not necessarily a necessity. One just has to think about what is a necessity.
-Jeter!
Friday, April 24, 2009
Next Speech! (actuative)
Saturday, April 18, 2009
Chapter 12 Concept
Friday, April 17, 2009
F L I C K R.
Thursday, April 16, 2009
Speech Buddies!
Saturday, April 11, 2009
Self Evauluation
Friday, April 10, 2009
Chapter 11 concept
Saturday, March 21, 2009
Components
Monday, March 16, 2009
Speech Buddies!
Saturday, March 14, 2009
Chapter 7 & 8 Concept
Facts and Statistics
Friday, March 13, 2009
Chapter 7 and 8 Speech Buddies
Saturday, March 7, 2009
Self Evaluation
Saturday, February 21, 2009
Discussion Week 5.3: Chapter 5 Concept
Thursday, February 19, 2009
Discussion Week 5.2: Speech Buddies
Sunday, February 15, 2009
Discussion Week 5.1: Audience Analysis/Adaptation
Saturday, February 14, 2009
discussion Week 4.3: Chapter 6 Concept
Friday, February 13, 2009
Discussion Week 4.2 Speech Buddies
Wednesday, February 11, 2009
Discussion Week 4.1 Research Interviews
Friday, February 6, 2009
Week 3: Discussion#2 (Speech Buddies)
Week 3: Discussion#1
Friday, January 30, 2009
Introduction
Well my alias name is mz.jeter, the name says it all. This is my first year at San Jose
State University, I am originally from Soledad which is not so far from SJSU. Even though I am not far away away from home,the transition from living at home and living in the dorms has been difficult for me because it is a total different environment. Academic wise,I enjoy my classes but I think what makes college difficult is the lack in self disipline. When people do not have self disipline then it is hard to maintain good grades. I have struggled with that because it is from going to an enviroment with teachers, parents, and mentors always being there for you and pushing you to study,to being by myself and getting myself to do work. When it comes to public speaking,I have very little experience and do not feel comfortable with it but I am looking to improve it. My shy side always dominates and that is when I begin to feel uncomfortable being in front of people. I hope to overcome my shyness and be able to speak in front of anyone. :)
P.S- I have this obsession with baseball. I pretty much love everything about it,
especially Derek Jeter, the shortstop for the New York Yankees. He plays awesome,and best of all, looks awesome in his uniform. :)