Wednesday, May 13, 2009
Concept
Evaluation!
Hi there! Well, I think I semi-sort of achieve the purpose of my speech. To explain, I was prepared for my speech, but I didn’t really quite get it across to my audience, at least I don’t think so. I felt sort of comfortable, but not all that much. I say this because I noticed in the video that I kept on touching my hair and was kind of fidgeting every so often. I felt somewhat confident at first, only because the professor had told us to take 3 deep breaths before beginning our speech, I felt that, that really helped me out, helped everyone out actually. Of course this excersise was going to help, it is also included in the speech Evolving Art book.
If I had to do the persuasive speech over again, I would have to practice a bit more. I did practice enough, so I think, I think that the problem was that I was trying to persuade an audience. I truly think that it is much harder to persuade an audience to do something, than to inform them of something.
Again, what I did that was distracting was the whole thing with my hair. I kept touching it every so often and I know I would have thought that would have been quite distracting if I were the one listening to one speak.
In this speech, what was different was the way I tried to persuade people. In my last speech, I was not trying to persuade anyone to do anything, I was simply informing them. In my final speech, I was trying to get people to do a certain thing. I gave example of athletes and proposed a solution and a visualization to what would happen if athletes were to continue doing what they are doing.
From a scale form 1-10, I would rate my eye contact a 6. I say a 6 because sure, I would look at the audience every now and then, but I would also look at the notecards. In my second speech,however, I know for a fact that I only looked at my speech cards for a little, not as much as I did for my final speech.
On a scale from A-F, I think I would give myself a C for a grade. I say this because, it was not the worst speech ever, but it was also not the best speech ever. A “B” is considered “average”, and a “C” is considered “average.” I believe that my speech was average, it was not a wow speech, but nor was it a whatever speech!
In this speech, I mentioned I believe one source citation. I should have added more, but I couldn’t really find a way to add them into the presentation.
Based on all three speeches, I know for a fact that I did way better on my second speech, the informative speech. I say this because I seemed to have been way more prepared and also because I did not really have to look down at my notecards because I knew much of the material. :)
-Jeter!
Future Endeavors.
Tuesday, May 12, 2009
Favorite Speech
Saturday, May 2, 2009
Speech Buddy Videos
The speech buddy videos that needed to be watched for this week had to do with home schooling. The pros and cons of this subject were talked about in the videos. In the con part of it,Robert uses evidence to make it clear on what side he is on, whether he is for, or against home schooling. If you want to get something clear and out to the audience, then you really want to have evidence and good supporting material so that they know what position you are taking. In the Pro video, Dixie uses reasoning,claims, and evidence which in return allows the audience to know where she stands and choose a side.
-Jeter!